I am six chapters in to my story (venlich has been mentioned in passing and Malakius has been thrown to the bottom of the plateau of demons, renamed Lucifers peak) Venlich is actually Kelcifers father, but in a new body. If anyone out there is reading this thing, heres a quotation from chapter 8 (i wrote chapter 8 first, then started on chapter 1)
"Suddenly, Malakius lept forward and grabbed Nalbrens lower jaw and, in a moment of animalistic frenzy he pulled it clean off. Nalbren fell to he knees, emiting a horrid gurgling noise, dropping his crossbow, which malakius snached up and fired into the fallen hunters head."
In other note, i discovered i have considerable skill as a cartoonist. i would give you an example but i havent got any art with me.
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